Post by Deleted on Oct 27, 2016 9:32:01 GMT -6
This is the script of what I posted in the discussion thread.
Ryuusei wakes up in alley...and immediately vomits yellow liquid. He staggers into a desolate street of the Earth city of Hong Kong, but completely unaware of this. As he's exiting, someone else appears in the alley and because of his blurry vision, Ryuusei can't make out much except for their long silver hair. This stranger appears to pick something up before the sound of something heavy approaches the area. This towering object at first appears as a blob, but as his vision comes more into focus it becomes humanoid in appearance...though with multiple dents, holes and is missing it's left arm. It's skin also appeared metallic.
*Triggers flashback to fighting off other metallic creatures, being captured and being forced to take hold of a certain sword in a room full of them*
Codarl Pilot: Iron's dead and so am I if that Maniac gets me...can't this piece of shit go any faster?
A.I.: Negative, this 'piece of shit' has sustained heavy damage. Our movement speed has been impaired.
Codarl Pilot: Crap! (I should cut my loss and go on foot)
*The AS lumbers forward as Ryuusei stands in the middle of the street several meters ahead.*
*Pilot spots the barely clothed teen on his monitor*
Codarl Pilot: Now what the hell?
Ryuusei: KUUHATOKOUDAN!
*His glassy green eyes briefly clear...before glowing with rage as he's propelled fist-first into the air inside of a cyclone. Striking the head unit with enough force to force the entire machine back before...*
Ryuusei: FUUJINKEN!
*Winds surrounding him in his previous attack were sucked into his left fist and then released in an explosion of air pressure as he punched the head a second time. The AS falls over and the head breaks off causing fluid to pour onto the street*
Ryuusei: DIE, DIE YOU METALLIC FUCK DIEEEE!
*Rains blows on the unit until he passes out from exhaustion. The injured pilot emerges from his machine and prepares to shoot the teen when members of Mithril arrive*
That's it for Ryuusei's segment, I want to hold off on doing anything else with him until chapter 2, let me know what you think.
Ryuusei wakes up in alley...and immediately vomits yellow liquid. He staggers into a desolate street of the Earth city of Hong Kong, but completely unaware of this. As he's exiting, someone else appears in the alley and because of his blurry vision, Ryuusei can't make out much except for their long silver hair. This stranger appears to pick something up before the sound of something heavy approaches the area. This towering object at first appears as a blob, but as his vision comes more into focus it becomes humanoid in appearance...though with multiple dents, holes and is missing it's left arm. It's skin also appeared metallic.
*Triggers flashback to fighting off other metallic creatures, being captured and being forced to take hold of a certain sword in a room full of them*
Codarl Pilot: Iron's dead and so am I if that Maniac gets me...can't this piece of shit go any faster?
A.I.: Negative, this 'piece of shit' has sustained heavy damage. Our movement speed has been impaired.
Codarl Pilot: Crap! (I should cut my loss and go on foot)
*The AS lumbers forward as Ryuusei stands in the middle of the street several meters ahead.*
*Pilot spots the barely clothed teen on his monitor*
Codarl Pilot: Now what the hell?
Ryuusei: KUUHATOKOUDAN!
*His glassy green eyes briefly clear...before glowing with rage as he's propelled fist-first into the air inside of a cyclone. Striking the head unit with enough force to force the entire machine back before...*
Ryuusei: FUUJINKEN!
*Winds surrounding him in his previous attack were sucked into his left fist and then released in an explosion of air pressure as he punched the head a second time. The AS falls over and the head breaks off causing fluid to pour onto the street*
Ryuusei: DIE, DIE YOU METALLIC FUCK DIEEEE!
*Rains blows on the unit until he passes out from exhaustion. The injured pilot emerges from his machine and prepares to shoot the teen when members of Mithril arrive*
That's it for Ryuusei's segment, I want to hold off on doing anything else with him until chapter 2, let me know what you think.